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Story Intro

At Nayik's house: (Author Note: You can skip this, it's just how it starts.)

Alarm Clock: BRRINGG! BRRINGG!
Nayik: Ugh, goddammit. *Turns off alarm* Why do I need a damn alarm when I can freeze time and sleep then? *After a couple minutes of washing up, Nayik walks downstairs* I guess I'll have some Corn Flakes for breakfast. *Pours Corn Flake into a bowl and a ball comes out* What's this? A toy? *Looks at mechanical ball* Why is it beeping... Oh.
Mech Ball: Countdown to Mile Radius Implosion in: 5;
Nayik: Heh, "Mile Radius Implosion"? I'll call it MRI Ball.
MRI Ball: 4;
Nayik: I wonder who put this in my Corn Flakes?
MRI Ball: 3;
Nayik: I guess I should go now. Oh well... *Pours milk on Corn Flakes*
MRI Ball: 2;
Nayik: *Takes a bite of cereal*
MRI Ball: 1;
Nayik: Ok, I guess I should go now for real.
MRI Ball: 0; Good-
Nayik: CHAOS CONTROL!

2 Miles away:

Nayik: *He reappears and looks toward his house* Bye!
Nayiks house blows up in the distance.




Chapter 1

*=Ray the Flying Squirrel
**=Ray the Hedgehog
Nayik goes to the Chaotix building in the Green Hill Zone:

Ruby: *Yelling behind the door* Damn it Vector! I am not going to pay 500 rings for you to find that damn bird! (Author Note: Look at Ruby's comic)
Vector: Sorry, but I'm not gonna search for birds for a cheap price until Charmy or Ray* get back from their vacation!
Espio: Why don't you find Tails and ask him to borrow his Tornado?
Ruby: I told you already! I already tried, but Tails had to use it cause all his other flying machines are broken.
Espio: Fine. Either wait until he comes back;
Ruby: He won't be back for weeks.
Vector: Or wait until Charmy and Ray* come back in 2 weeks.
Ruby: You know what? F*** you! *Storms out of the room*

Outside of the room, Nayik and Ruby bump into eachother.
Nayik and Ruby: Ooof!
Nayik: Sorry, I didn't see you there.
Ruby: I don't care. Just don't go in that room. *Points at the room she was in* They are jackasses.
Nayik: Well I need to get some detective or someone to find out who tried to kill me.
Ruby: I think I can try to help you. I am looking for that bird who killed Ray**
Nayik: Oh, I heard about that. You didn't finish him off, so he ran away.
Ruby: Yeah... *Long pause*
Nayik: We should get going now
Ruby: Of course, right.




Chapter 2

At Drought Desert at night:

Ruby: I'm tired, and cold. We should go sleep somewhere.
Nayik: I don't know where, but I can make a fire.
Ruby: That would be great. Thanks.
Nayik: Pyro Flare! *a fireball appears in the air*
Ruby: It's so warm.
Nayik: Did you see that?
Ruby: What? Where?
Nayik: Back there. *Points backward*
Ruby: I don't see anything. Have you gone psycho?
Nayik: ... Maybe. *looks back* [murmur] Light of Karma. [/murmur] *night turns light*
???: *kiss* Hi Nayik.
Nayik: Hey luvvy.
Ruby: Who are you talking to? *turns* Oh, hows it going Alex?
Alex: Nothing much, I was just trying to find my Nay-Nay.
Ruby: Who's- Oh...
Alex: Yeah, somone blew up my headband with a ball.
Nayik: Did the ball talk?
Alex: Yes. It blew it up after I was coming to your house. Which was in rubble. And I also read an inscription that said, Made by TEMtZ, right before I Chaos Controlled out of there.
Ruby: [whisper]Sounds like Tuffy did it.[/whisper]
Nayik: Well, whoever is after you, is probably after me.
Alex: Probably.
Ruby: I got it! Tuffy is in on it!
Alex: Right, and so is Eggman, Mephiles, and the Zoa.
Nayik: Hold on. That actually makes sense.
Alex and Ruby: What?
Nayik: Look at this. *uses sword as a writing tool* T for Tuffy, E for Eggman, M for Mephiles, and tZ for the Zoa.
Alex: Your so smart Nayik *hug*
Nayik: Thanks to you, We wouldn't have known who was after us. *kiss*
Ruby: Eww, lovey dovey.
Alex and Nayik: Yup.




Chapter 3

Coming Soon.



I take fancharacters, and these are short chapters.
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I think the fanfic is cool Nayik.
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definitely interesting man
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